If you 're not happy with it, toss it in the bin and take some time making maybe just heads to scale for practice. When you have that in hand go for the full figure. My figure head as you see it in the picture I had to reduce in size several times, cutting away a portion of the body until it got closer to 6 1/2 scale feet rather than eight! The actual one was probably smaller than that! I would have liked more detail (in particular the eyes.) But the photos are all very illusory. It works a whole lot better in the flesh (or boxwood) seen from a scale 100' away.
The old MS instruction book for the 1:192 scale "Young America", ca.1955, advises simplification. " The model isn't judged by what isn't there, but by what is."
I suggest you get the figurehead to an overall pleasing full but unrefined state. Step back and mentally remove the next layer. Repeat until you get close enough that it works for the model. Not your ideal of the figurehead. Your other carving seems to be a pretty fair example. The mermaid is fine without the eyes or the scales. I bet the whole stern works better with the naked eye as opposed to the photography.
Remember, you joked that you tune in to my build log to see what do-over I'm undertaking next! Remember all the ship's boats? I have a fleet!
Pete
Your model is turning into a masterwork! No hurry, Dude. Keep up the great work!
